MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.


~ Inaesthetic Global Pollution ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ INAESTHETIC GLOBAL POLLUTION ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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  • Louis Cecile (4/21/2012 5:32:00 PM)

    Emotions run deep. Very reminiscent of the misguided nature of yesteryear when the slightest thing was confused and condoned. In regards to your other poem, I believe people focused too much on the title than the meaning of maintaining innocence. The great thing about poetry is the freedom of expression and this should always be maintained. Your piece clearly shows the impact of the pain of the last few weeks. Quite an interesting style of bombarding the reader with a shower of words both common and uncommon causing much when the main theme is well documented. The intensity is truly felt. A talented poet must remain to write. (Report)Reply

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  • Matt Mooney (8/20/2010 5:13:00 PM)

    A poem with a strong statement.The theme is well developed and sustained.10. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/3/2010 7:18:00 AM)

    The crazy order of things and the crazy order of the world we live in. None lives the world in a buoyant state we found it in! Great write. Indeed this poem gets into the fabric of our culture today and what is sadly considered a norm. My prayer is that our must dos must remain our call to action. Nicely penned! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/31/2010 2:46:00 PM)

    I just don't know what to say.I haven't the eloquence of some. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2010 5:29:00 PM)

    A piece that spell -checks 'In aesthetic Global Pollution”....
    The whys were
    Created in the images of man as blinders for a few and light for the many. Morals and ethics [in my opinion] do not apply to the rich and or powerful few. They can do all things your 2nd stanza alludes to and it’s “Boys will be Boys”

    [Answer to us] Women
    Emotional exchange
    For paradigm change
    Global world will breathe freely!

    We’re the caregivers for men…the dominant ones
    The mother of all [mother nature] will take care of all her children…even the domineering ones.

    Women are victim? [Not so with women like my, NIV! ]
    Women are:
    Scientists
    Doctors,
    Biotechnologists etc, etc, etc >>>>>>

    I pondered this poem, my finding below:

    Ms Niv a Feminist...perhaps not! Feminine insight...yes! Your poem checks some of the global polluters and their pollutants and some of the harmful consequences for the present... and who knows how the future will be effected by man's dominant nature and behavior. Since women have been viewed as the Pandora’s, whore witches, Eves [western religion] and every other label that enhances [male] testosterone [a little DNA alteration? ] Anyway, enough. I just finished reading an article in The Atlantic magazine [periodical] ' The End of Men' according to the article women are closing the gap between male and female both culturally and economically. My dear you need not apology necessary…. I doubt if we’ll receive one from the dominant ones.

    Love you’re truthfulness

    Surly a 10+++>>>>
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  • (5/26/2010 11:30:00 AM)

    Hon’ble Poet Terence George Craddock

    I’m indeed feeling relived again that you voiced against such ‘Foulmouthed’ … ‘Vilemouthed’…’Vilebulimic’…and many many thanks by all hearts…

    Total sanitization is not possible …but such ‘Motormouthed’ persons must be shown Red Card [read ‘Red Eyes’]…to flush out them from the Tournament of Poetry for a fair play not a foul play.

    Thanks you again for sensing a woman’s trauma
    Kindest regards
    I’m indebtedly yours
    niv
    -
    Copy to: Hon’ble Poet Terence George Craddock
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  • (5/26/2010 11:15:00 AM)

    The Psychopath Sadist
    Uninhibited ID
    On continuous
    Contemplation Belowbeltline. [1]

    It's not just women who get preyed upon with rabid comments by the nasty bullies who have left the playground but not their old habits. 'Vile stalker of shadow slime' is a line that would fit well in this poem. All the worst comments I received were all from the same male. When I checked such comments of his went back at least two years. Some of us aim to try to express and sow beauty within this world. We may wrote a few poems like this upon topics we would rather not have to deal with, but when a voice is necessary it must speak out for that which is just and virtuous. Excellent lines to confront the stalkers from the shadows. 10+++++
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  • (5/25/2010 5:36:00 AM)

    No apologies needed, where would we be without the ladies in our lives. You have said it masterfully and I enjoyed the read very much. Lynn (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2010 1:17:00 PM)

    Very much appropriate and in blatant way the Poet Protested …and it was needed…
    We readers must en masse come forward and join hands to flush out pollutants.

    Every word is loaded with power dynamite…explosive…to stir the phlegmatic so called peace seekers…

    A few quotes below:

    [1] Uninhibited ID /On continuous/Contemplation Belowbeltline’ – loves to stay and breed thoughts likewise

    [2] ‘In Hitlist Targetlist/We Women Are In’ – and a Perfect sure why why and why?

    [3] ‘Uncontrolled Queasy Vile Eros’ - They thrive on such psychic oxygen

    [4] ‘Pregnancy Termination’ – Where right gene has been flagged out …and kibosh seeing light of world

    [5] ‘Smilingly Opt For Kidless Life.’ – Out of desperation such resolution what a pity to civil societymen


    [6] ‘Find Space …No Spycam/Walk Dignifiedly Fearlessly’ – Desperate yearning for getting the fundamental rights.

    [7] ‘We’ll Be Lovegivercarer’ – Her [women in general] commitment and allegiance to human fraternity.

    I thank Poet for such a protesting and spine erect stand against all such unjust inflicted to women.

    Thanks for patience reading
    10++

    PS I thank all readers who came forward to protest specially Dr. Kar
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  • (5/3/2010 10:56:00 AM)

    I’ve read in full the Poetry and comments by readers and especially Ms. Nivedita’s WHY READ THIS and I feel a few words to submit.

    [1] Many upstarts are there who falsely claim to be Poet [perusing finer pursuits]; factually they’ve zero vibe on such subjects.

    [2] Thro’ controversial comments and posts they try to get footage and mileage …but that dries out and they become xerotic soon because of nil calorie.

    [3] Indeed I’m sorry no note such greenhorns are there claim to be intellectual …I doubt their psychic sanity.

    [4] Poet was very much vexed by out of civil limits and aesthetics and this Poetry is a vigorous rejoinder as a representative of womenfolk and was very much needed.

    [5] Being a male I find less rejoinder from womenfolk; do they love to hear the melancholic mellow of violin of King Nero while Rome was burning…please O Dear women please ponder over…bury head not in sand like ostrich in desert storm.
    10+
    Dr. V.

    PS Thanks Ms Nivedita for such an outspoken point-blank poetic post.12
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  • (4/19/2010 2:09:00 PM)

    World can never be completely sanitized from Inaesthetic Pollutions.

    Every amount of genetic engineering will prove futile.

    I’ve read comments and find all agree unanimously to curb all these. It was needed thru a process called Psychical ‘-Reconstruction-Engineering’ [PRE]

    Poem itself specks in favor of PRE. Indeed why since ageless time women folk are the prey?

    Let all walks of life stand together against such things. Pledge ‘We Can’ and ‘We Will’.

    Thanks all readers for standing against all bad comments against Poet Ms. Nivedita.
    10++
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  • (4/14/2010 10:21:00 AM)

    Agree with Poet ‘…over all soul’s sanitization…’.
    Dr. Kar has ably voiced against such pollution.
    As woman Poet she has expressed all types of feminine cooperation what usually they render still such pollutants reside and make us heavy parched…
    Very bold and straight poetic dialogue with positive approach
    10++
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  • (3/27/2010 4:45:00 AM)

    interesting bunch of ifs i do not believe in cloning but if some evil traits can be removed great (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (3/27/2010 12:25:00 AM)

    a sensible write. shan (Report)Reply

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  • (3/26/2010 11:50:00 PM)

    Brilliant expression! I sincerely desire that the globe is set free from all negative emotions, perverted thoughts and actions...these are much more detrimental than material pollutants!

    Innocence is the greatest treasure one has, which connects us to the divine! Ironically, we humans take pride when it is obscured after our childhood!

    There are times when 'instigating erotic expressions' and also 'publicity craving expressions' get away in the guise of 'aesthetic expressions'! This is something...which all of us (irrespective of gender) need to introspect!

    Best wishes......
    10+++++
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  • (3/26/2010 8:38:00 AM)

    A very strong, contemporary message
    delivered with drama and vitality.An
    original mind is definately at
    work here.10, for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (3/26/2010 1:22:00 AM)

    I like the way you let go the building steam in you; I have felt it many times.

    On the matter of future tech advancements, I would like to say that the way bio technology is being developed with out any self control on the part of the scientists 'on what is right and what is wrong'; a day of reckoning will soon confront us as we seek to challenge God.

    Research if misused can play havoc with a lot of innocent people.
    Hope the predators of this unchallenged development will take heed.
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (3/25/2010 2:22:00 PM)

    what i would like to say is dear niv, is, that's your words in below--'I’m hopeful Aesthetic Dawn will rise and make us pure purer purest … '

    the people who trying to scandalize aesthetic beauty, his endeviour fruitless no doubt. just move forward- let the dogs bark and the caravan passes....

    best wishes
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  • (3/24/2010 3:10:00 AM)

    well a very authentic and rsponsible write. you have covered all aspects.brilliant and timely.
    voted 10 for you
    surya
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  • (3/23/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    Hello Niv,
    For few days I was away from here and so also my reading and writing....

    Read your Inaesthetic Global Pollution and it's a poem of your grave thoughts about all the polluting features going on in the current times especially those where women folk in general got affected... gender testing, abortion and so on...

    Your expressions are always very 'calling a spade a spade' type... I like it. You always make your readers thinking for some good time even after the reading. Here also you've provided a good amount of thoughts for the readers to ponder.

    Keep it up,
    Kaku.
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