Independent Poem by Jewels Wiseman

Independent



She looks to the sky
Standing proud and tall all alone
With parents watching

Thursday, May 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was walking through when I saw a tree all alone in the center of the trail but trees were all around the outside edge of the trail. It reminds me of my own independence and how my parents are still there to stand behind my decisions.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 24 May 2014

What a beautiful analogy! Your note gives this great little piece a different perspective but the message the poem gave was beautiful even without! Nicely done!

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