Aminath Neena

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Insatiable Dreams - Poem by Aminath Neena

She is the libretto to which his poetry
could not find a rhyme
Yet she was his sonnet

She is the mystery to which his sagacity
failed to produce a key
Yet she was his kismet

She is the tempo for which his symphony
could not compose a rhythm
yet she was his lyrics

She is the touchstone of his velocity
with which he failed to ploy
Yet she was his wings

She is the hyperbole for which his trenchancy
could not opt for a suitable satire
Yet she was his literature

She is the paper for which his destiny
had omitted to spare some ink
Yet she was in his past, present and future

She was his “wish upon a star” melody
As he was her good luck charm
And yet... his lips would never taste hers

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams

Form: Ars Poetica


Comments about Insatiable Dreams by Aminath Neena

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (6/5/2016 5:34:00 AM)


    She was his “wish upon a star” melody
    As he was her good luck charm
    And yet... his lips would never taste hers... somany wonderful comparisons.........liked it very much.
    she was everything...... in spite of that, he could not taste he lips....... sad...... thank you for the feelings you convey through this poem. tony
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  • (2/22/2016 12:42:00 AM)


    Very poignant poem, filled with possibilities that in the end were never realized. Fantastic write, loved it! Thank you for sharing it! RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/12/2015 11:45:00 PM)


    The ending was tragic. Nicely written, Aminath (Report) Reply

    Aminath Neena Haneef (9/28/2015 10:39:00 PM)

    Thank you

  • Rahman Henry (9/7/2015 11:26:00 PM)


    Profound Poem. I really like it. dear poet, keep it up. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015



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