royness ( ' ' )

Iron In The Soul

A stone is thrown. A window
Shivers briefly in its frame, shatters
Into fragments, falls in a rain
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  • Robert Howard (1/2/2007 11:45:00 AM)

    I have seen this cycle in St. Louis and Detroit. Once proud well built buildings cast into neglect beyond restoration. Tomorrow the flowers and maples will be ripped out to build a strip mall.

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  • Linda HepnerLinda Hepner (9/4/2006 7:13:00 PM)

    Message from LA: there is a Raymond Chandler type ring to your poem, LA at it's bleakest. Your poem is weighty with atmosphere.

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