Thursday, September 26, 2013

It's Raining Comments

Rating: 4.9
It's raining tear-drops
gently on the sidewalk
of my heart

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Heather Burns
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017
Tear drops are gently falling down from sky to Earth. This is really lovely rain seen ever. Petals are slipping from blossom with continuity of breeze. Brilliant imagery is drawn here...10
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Li Sharry 29 March 2015
It is lovely poem, I love it very much!
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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013
'soft winds continue whispering your name sweet breezes tantalize my mind filling it with thoughts of you'. It's so sweet to hear the name of our loved ones pronounced!
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 08 October 2013
love the simplicity of words selection and yet gave high impact as literature devices. thanks for sharing. :)
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Patricia Grantham 03 October 2013
Glad you are back Heather you were missing for a little while. Raining tears while cleansing the heart. Lost love brings tears and memories. Very touching.
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Clarence Prince 01 October 2013
No wonder the song says memories don't live like people do, they always be you...!
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Matt Mooney 01 October 2013
I walk with you. Beautiful.
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Dee Corpolongo 01 October 2013
What a beautiful poem this is~ worded so beautiful and tenderly....like the petals on a rose~
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Valsa George 01 October 2013
Bathed in memories...! . When the present is washed away, the past emerges, whispering someone's name you love! Love this romantic write! !
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Jr Cuyam 29 September 2013
ooh how sweet it is mam..nice poem..God bless you
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Danny Draper 28 September 2013
Delicate and romantic, fine thoughts.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 September 2013
Tear-drops raining on heart's sidewalks. Beautiful metaphor. Thank you.
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Sallam Yassin 28 September 2013
every thing is making me remembering the future you
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Lyn Paul 28 September 2013
Pure romance in these words. Love the title washing away dreams of yesterday. Thank you
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Adeline Foster 27 September 2013
Good poem! I too wrote one about rain on a different vein. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline
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Poetheart Morgan 27 September 2013
Romantic and delicate memories of a past a fresh and white bouquet is what comes to my mind
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Ruby Mostazir 27 September 2013
wow! so romantic, so touchy.................
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Valerie Dohren 27 September 2013
Lovely Heather, very sweet and romantic.
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Hazel Durham 27 September 2013
Beautiful write with heartfelt sentiments and lovely imagery!
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Tribhawan Kaul 27 September 2013
We have sentimental memories of our earlier phases of our life and tears simply bring them alive. Lovely poem.
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