Tamara Moir

Rookie (22/03/1991 / Brisbane)

It's The Way He... - Poem by Tamara Moir

It's the way he makes you cry
It's the way he's in your mind
It's the way he makes you fall in love
It's the way he makes you feel
It's the way he treats you
It's the way he makes you fall in love
It's the way he kisses you
It's the way everything reminds you of him
It's the way he makes you fall in love


Comments about It's The Way He... by Tamara Moir

  • (9/19/2005 10:58:00 AM)


    Very nice, however (i hope you find this to be constructive criticism) you might like to to consider lines 2 and 8. I like the way each line starts the same but it doesn't on these two lines. you could change 'he's' (line 2) to 'he is' and 'everything reminds you of him' (line 8) to 'he is in everything you see'. Its just what I would do. Otherwise, i like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 17, 2005



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