Friday, August 26, 2011

It's Time To Act! Comments

Rating: 4.4
Drugs, drugs, drugs,
What do you get?
More than harm is its effect,
Oh! What a dangerous quest.


Meriam Joseph
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 October 2015
Verily, drugs are a curse on man especially the youngsters....10 I invite you to read my poems
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Wow! You brought your stone to the building of humanity. That is a salvatory poem conducive to help smokers stop smoking.
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Lyllie Menjivar 02 January 2012
This poem speaks for itself. This is very well written. - DarkX474
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Stella Mary 30 December 2011
It si Time to Act. You are a very observant girl.
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Anita Khelawan 12 September 2011
what a lovely and positive poem...i enjoyed's time to act thanx for sharing (:
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Kathleen Hannan 10 September 2011
Great insight for one so young. You are obviously a very observent young girl. Not one wasted word.
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Anupama Anpat 08 September 2011
lovely verses.....its amazing you have such a vision at a tender age. Good work!
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Unwritten Soul 07 September 2011
Meriam, you have voice to tell every little words to the world, at 11 years old you are really have a big potential as a big name in poetry, :) keep it up ok? _Unwritten Soul
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Ken E Hall 06 September 2011
True message from one so young poetry is not always about flowers nice to see...regards
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Dikshita Saikia 30 August 2011
read the poem and loved it. You're a genius!
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rooba royale 30 August 2011
a gr8 n powerful messge...... nicely written and u hve a great grip on the topic
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Athira Jijo Arakkal 30 August 2011
Hi Meriam, A well written poem and very right topic whic gives a powerful message to the people all around the world. A great poem....
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Paige Venegas 29 August 2011
Great poem, I can relate to it. But I don't know you so I don't know why you asked me to read this.
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Nqabakazi Lufume 29 August 2011
This poem is carring a very stong message in a simple way. Well done
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Mandi June 28 August 2011
Very impressive! A strong message and wonderful poem. I look forward to reading more from you!
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Joseph Juarez 27 August 2011
nice poem great meaning
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Stefanie Fontker 27 August 2011
I respect the rights one has to their own body, but you present a strong opinion here, and you express it well. Great poetry.
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Shadow Girl 27 August 2011
Very wise words and a powerful message.....u r wise beyond your years and a fantastic poet. SG
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Christina Phan 27 August 2011
The message is important and its time to do something before its too late. Think before we do something. This poem is well done. Keep up the fanastic job.
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Jim Troy 27 August 2011
I love the danger framed by the last line. The soul just fades away What else of value is there to lose Meriam. That has to be the vision that would be so frightening to see..... A persons soul just has had enough, And gets up and slowing starts walking toward the door........ That a vision you have painted..... This one could really be a great one..... Plant that vision thousands of times....millions of times..... Great one......Jim Troy
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