poet Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Jaded

Centuries of delight reprised
Weaving thru the statuary
Peeing Eros, spouting lion
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  • Ben Gieske (2/11/2009 2:20:00 PM)

    You make a good point. Your ending is very interesting.

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  • Gil GregorioGil Gregorio (2/8/2009 9:16:00 PM)

    Your poetry style reminds of Homer and Shakepeare.... intriguing really.

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  • Kite Remedy (2/1/2009 9:26:00 PM)

    you really optimize the use of imagery and Greek term here too,
    definitely a fine piece..

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  • Fiona Davidson (1/27/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    So many images here Ediie makes it a wonderful read...thank you...Fi

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  • Leslie Ching (1/26/2009 8:52:00 PM)

    you can even bring a chuckle from greek mythology: 'Peeing Eros' gives the reader quite an image...lc

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