Monday, September 7, 2009

.. Jealousy..A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins Comments

Rating: 3.3
Resentment mixed with greed
Are the tunes she sings
From love and lust she bleed
On envy she feed

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Eyan Desir
COMMENTS
Tom Fox 26 September 2009
i'm growing sick of this theological perspective...it's unfair and ridiculous...you obviously blame sexy women for everything...i'm growing tired of the hate...let's see some personal reflection, bud...
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* Naphright * 23 September 2009
i like the depth of your poems, i will read more, they make people think but are all of them metaphorically against women. its not fun for me to read being that i am a she
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Beauty Philosophy 17 September 2009
A lovely poem tackling and important human feeling which is liable to reduce love to dust instead of increasing it...Excessive Jealousy is really a sin and it stems from the FEAR of losing one's partner and by extension it bespeaks the person's lack of self- confidence, so he acts in a jealous and an over-protective way in order to keep his partner... good subject and good description too...voted 10!
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Indira Babbellapati 14 September 2009
such is the power of jealousy, i suppose!
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Romeo Della Valle 13 September 2009
Insecurity is the root of jealousy, I was a very jealous person and thank God, I was able to overcome it, I became a wise man, since I learned the hard and painful ways, that whenever there is an ending, there is a new beginning, and also I learned not to miss what is gone, but the one new and flesh that is coming my way one day, , Love and Peace, Romeo
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Marieta Maglas 13 September 2009
Your excellent abstract poem suggests that sometimes all the human misery and pain of soul cannot be healed by love and moreover it can destroy love totally and irreversibly.Thank you for sharing.............10+++++++++
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Candace Johnson 12 September 2009
jealousy is truley like that it... it hurts... great write
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Luke Easter 12 September 2009
Jealousy is an emotion and typically refers to the negative thoughts and feelings of insecurity, fear, and anxiety over an anticipated loss of something that the person values, such as a relationship, friendship, or love. Jealousy often consists of a combination of emotions such as anger, sadness, and disgust. Jealousy differs from envy in that jealousy is about something one has and is afraid of losing, while envy refers to something one does not have and either wants to acquire or to prevent another from acquiring.
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Allan Macli Borges 12 September 2009
yes, jealousy is just like that. a wound that eats the heart and soul... very well writen man!
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Noel Horlanda 12 September 2009
Jealousy is another word for envy/envious. There are souls who feel this way, a lot of them.This is an excellent piece of work, it speaks the truth...10+
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Bob Blackwell 12 September 2009
You are so right jealousy does lead to other sins, greed to keep for oneself for one. A great write 10+
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Erin Ford 11 September 2009
your poem reminds me of so many people i know.its a bit sad that people are truly like this but thats just how people are.
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Annie Girl 11 September 2009
awsome.....great wright......
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Liz Jumah 11 September 2009
this is, to say the least, fantastic.i like it.keep writing.
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Beauty Philosophy 11 September 2009
A lovely poem tackling and important human feeling which is liable to reduce love to dust instead of increasing it...Excessive Jealousy is really a sin and it stems from the FEAR of losing one's partner and by extension it bespeaks the person's lack of self- confidence, so he acts in a jealous and an over-protective way in order to keep his partner... good subject and good description too...voted 10!
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Louis Rams 10 September 2009
jealousy is a sin and it starts from deep within. it can make the most calmest person change their ways and their lives will never be the same. good write a ten
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Not A Dream Choice 10 September 2009
seriously... naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i dont like I believe that jealousy sometimes make people doing great things...really
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Thomas Coltrin 10 September 2009
i liked it didnt make any sense in the begaining but then it was awesom wonderfull ps...read my new poem timeless thank you
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Omar Ibrahim 10 September 2009
great as usual...........10 for the man eyan
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The Understander 09 September 2009
10/10, keep writing =)
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