Tuesday, December 11, 2007

Jealousy Leads To Attacking. Comments

Rating: 4.0

The poetry I know is not made for attacking
people jealous of others 'cause there truly slacking
the content infront just keeps on lacking
to much jealousy will send you packing

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Ricky Owen
COMMENTS
Ian Bowen 14 December 2007

Found this to be a good piece of work, for one so young.

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Effie Yalena Steyn 12 December 2007

Surprisingly mature (in a good way! !) Well done. Effie x

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Thad Wilk 11 December 2007

Nice write Rick! ! *10*!

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