Jet-Lagged Poem by Glen Kappy

Jet-Lagged

Rating: 5.0


"Like a moth into a blowing fan"
from sleepless hours in a flying can—
airline food, too much caffeine—
to fight a cold—an antihistamine—
from Prague to Minneapolis
are reasons that I feel like this.

Saturday, May 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: tired,travel,travelling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
While preparing for an upcoming vacation, my wife found a pad on which I wrote for our 2001 trip to the Czech Republic and southern Poland. I liked the image I found there so well— now quoted in the first line—that I wrote the rest that follows it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Jet lagged - like a moth blowing into a fan. Wow! A perfect explanation, humorous yet serious, a true account of an in-flight experience. Glen, hope you enjoyed your vacation. with warm good wishes.

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Glen Kappy 29 May 2018

Hi, Geeta! Thanks! As I write we’re just a little while from leaving New York City and heading for upstate New York. Been good so far. Take care. -Glen

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Valsa George 20 May 2018

This is a general feeling of one who has made a long journey! Jet lag makes one feel so exhausted! I love the first line! Journey across different time zones makes one's sleep greatly disturbed! Enjoyed this humorous and beautifully rhyming poem!

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Glen Kappy 20 May 2018

thanks, valsa! and in general i enjoy your humor, that you're not too serious to write limericks. laughter does us good; it's a challenge to those forces that would make us lose hope and despair. may it be yours a-plenty! -glen

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Susan Williams 19 May 2018

That first line definitely got me sitting upright in my chair and darting a wary look at the fan blowing air and? ? ? ? on me! Enjoyed the succinct manner of this poem- which sounded so much like the weary utterances of a sick and jet-lagged passenger. A pleasant and humorous write- -but you have me thinking about that fan of mine... and the fate of any innocent bug life...

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Glen Kappy 19 May 2018

thank you for your comments that had me smiling, susan. good to hear from you. consider, however, that the moth would never reach the cutting blades but be blown back for trying. be and stay well. -glen

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2018

Your travelling experience in airlines with beautiful vacation time is brilliantly presented in this motivational poem. This is definitely an excellent poem...10

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Glen Kappy 19 May 2018

hey, kumarmani! thanks for your positive comments. it appears i'll have to change the punctuation in the fourth line since ph doesn't want to put a space between the closing parenthesis and the following word. be blessed! -glen

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New York, NY USA
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