Anita Trivedi

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Just A Moment….. - Poem by Anita Trivedi

Just a moment let me be with you,
Just wait right now don't leave…..

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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/24/2016 5:47:00 AM)

    Just a moment let me be with you,
    Just wait right now don't leave…..

    Let's live every moment of this evening,
    Let's this sea, this wind & this nature
    for us sing.
    Let's hold hand &feel the feeling of
    togetherness,
    Yes I know however we go far our love
    will be no less.
    Just let me drink those tears flowing
    towards your cheek,
    Yes I can hear your silence's peak.

    Let this evening grow to night,
    And this star's shine & let a moon
    light.
    Tomorrow you have to go for war,
    So let's once again like kids count
    that beautiful stars.
    What else life has store for us don't
    know,
    So in these moments let our hearts flow.

    Just a moment let me be with you,
    Just wait right now don't leave…..
    Let's walk together for a while,
    And just give your sweet smile.
    I will capture your smile in my
    heart forever,
    Fragrance of our relation will die never.

    Wow..what a great poet in you Anita!
    It's a better war poem than any of the ones I have read amongst the Soviet war poems.
    At least far far better than 3000 of them.
    You portray yourself as a great wife and a trustworthy beloved bride.
    Thanks for the poem.10 for if.
    Subhas
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  • Drtony Brahmin (8/22/2015 7:09:00 AM)

    I'll land to the world of stars &
    angels,
    And then in this world there will
    be no strangers.
    I'll land to the world of rain
    showers,
    And then I'll make everyone feel
    god's love every hour. dear anita poetess, so long i did not log into poemhunter. just today i began to write again and to read. thank you for this wonderful poem God bless you always. tony
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/28/2011 9:36:00 AM)

    Bursting with beauty and full of feelings. Well written my friend! 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2010 5:33:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem Anita: -)
    A moment.. that such as this when taken into your heart..will carry you both through the days and nights apart..
    I wish many more for you and your future husband, and his safe return into your arms.

    Blessings Angeljj: -)
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  • Dwi Utami (8/4/2010 5:22:00 AM)

    oww everyone should have a moment but your moment so great..
    Moment togetherness
    Moment of evening.
    Moment we have love*
    oww very touch..+10.congrats
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  • (8/1/2010 11:58:00 PM)

    a universal flee..unique esteem....excellent....thank you and God bless...a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Matt Mooney (7/31/2010 12:01:00 PM)

    What a pity that such love has to be put on hold-and for the sake of what? 'Make love not war' will always make sense. A lovely poem of the parting of lovers.10. (Report) Reply

  • (7/30/2010 12:36:00 PM)

    Anita, I just read your new entry 'Just a moment'. You have penned this in a romantic tune. Loved it. Thank you so much for letting this opportunity to read you. keep flowing. Subhakamana.-Dom (Report) Reply

  • Nooruddeen Mm (7/30/2010 5:43:00 AM)

    Perfectly explained the commitment. A soldier is in the middle of his loved ones and mother country (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2010 9:56:00 AM)

    Solider ties knots twice [lol]…one with Mother land and the other with beloved…indeed soldiers beloveds concern for comeback in romantic tune here nicely orchestrated…flowething emotion…spilling…dousing whole being…fine moments with this poetry I enjoyed…thanks for sharing…
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (7/29/2010 7:47:00 AM)

    Humanity is the last word, not brutality.......ultimate approach........a different style as a responsible and sensitive human being.

    Two different dimensions reflects through this writing.....1] Universal lover's heart can not bear the parting, wants the living touch of beloved to keep eternally with self......2] Framed work of social commitment. Soldiers life have been adopted to propagate human approach against war. Appreciating. Well done. Write more.......

    Regards,
    10+
    pranab
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  • (7/29/2010 6:57:00 AM)

    Excellent work, Anita (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (7/29/2010 6:42:00 AM)

    a nice write..Well penned (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2010 5:51:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, celebrating, , love, , happiness, togetherness, compassion, , keep it up... :) :) (Report) Reply

  • Aastha Uppal (7/29/2010 5:34:00 AM)

    beautifully explains the commitment of a soldier, the relationship with his loved ones, what they must be going through during the difficult times of war.. how selflessly the soldier serves the country and with the same selflessness how the loved ones are ready to hold on during the war times and wait everafter for him to come back, , , nice theme.. well written (Report) Reply



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