Friday, February 28, 2014

Kbhi Chuka Na Paoongi...[dedication To Maa] Comments

Rating: 4.2
tere anchal ko thaama to socha,,
isse choot na paoongi..
tu meri zindagi hai,, tujhse dur kasie jaoongi..
yeh zindagi nahi tera

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shraddha shraddha the poetess
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Sekharan Pookkat 28 April 2019
Dedication to all mothers- a poets tribute with touching words- my 10++
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Rahul gupta 21 January 2019
Best poem in the history
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Ramesh Rai 04 September 2014
Maa is a natural word and equivalent to all creatures.
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Neela Nath Das 02 September 2014
You often write on your mom or mom of any one who appears before us as symbol of sacrifice and dedication.
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Shahzia Batool 15 April 2014
sad and beautifully written shraddha!
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Anoushka Sinha 25 March 2014
Really touching shraddha, as always wndrful! !
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Saavi Garg 10 March 2014
Such a beautiful poem..i wish i could write like that.
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Kanav Justa 04 March 2014
wow, , , , wonderful write, , , a wonderful flow of emotions in this poem, , , , ,
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Neeraj Hans 02 March 2014
great dear.. Mom is the only trace of God that we can see with our eyes... I think she's first and God is 2nd..
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Suman Kumar Das 02 March 2014
Superb! Dear.....................full of heartfelt words and emotion...............Keep it up.
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Tripsha Ghosh 02 March 2014
U made everyyone cry babes awesome
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Abhinit Chute (abz) 02 March 2014
Awesome...! Tear-Breaking! So Beautiful poem! And I look forward to turn to Hindi poetry! Invitation to read my poems..
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Neela Nath Das 01 March 2014
Kya baat kya baat! Kitni khush nasib he tumhari mom!
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Nikita Dutt 28 February 2014
koi nahi chuka pata hai yeh karz par har ma ko unke bachon ki hassi aur khushi bohot pyaari hoti hai, unke bache humesa khush rahe yehi sochti hain wo. bohot pyaar se likhi hai yeh shraddha aapne. May God bless you.keep writing and thankyou for sharing with us.
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Vivek Tiwari 28 February 2014
Hindi kavitaon me advitiy. Gm aur sakaratmak soch ki adbhut sammishran. Dil ko chhune vali marmsparshi kavita. I'll rate it 10
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Vivek Tiwari 28 February 2014
Hindi kavitaon me advitiy. Gm aur sakaratmak soch ki adbhut sammishran. Dil ko chhune vali marmsparshi kavita. I'll rate it 10
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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2014
My Mother, my Goddess, living Goddess, for her I am here, my all in all, thanks. beautiful.
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Geetha Jayakumar 28 February 2014
Dear Shraddha, your poem is fantastic. Yeh Karz hai hi itna anmol ki jo beti ya beta appni maa ka karz kabhi bhi nahin utaar payegi. Really your write is superb. I loved reading each lines. Keep writing poem in this way and we love reading it.
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 February 2014
A very well composed piece on mom.......Shraddha..............mother is such a staff which is matchless, unequaled, unparalleled, peerless, unrivaled, inimtable and so on...............well done.....thanks for sharing
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Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 28 February 2014
Very moving Shradda, I got absorbed in it... No doubt, maa is the best creation of God! Keep it up, keep writin poems! :)
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