Saturday, August 8, 2009

Kiss My Soul Comments

Rating: 4.9
If that morning would be my ideal incredible readiness,
In a forgotten time of the tellurium and most desirable land,
Your certain love would come to utter my vivid happiness-
Kissing closed eyelids, caressing them with your tender hand.

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Marieta Maglas
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Dr. Antony Theodore 22 November 2018
Your soul would penetrate totally my soul with your embrace. The intangible feelings would turn into tangible unequivocal shivers. divinity. divine touch and intervention, kiss, soul.. a very fine poem, very original dear poetess.
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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 28 November 2017
Truly a sensational poem. Wonderfully expressed romance through real happenings. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
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James Mclain 28 November 2017
I think about you daily.. iip.. James McLain
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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 November 2017
Such an uplifting poem, Marieta... congrats for being chosen...a huge 10+++
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 November 2017
Oh! what a soulful writing.......Marieta.......I am really touched.....so touching your words are......outstanding cong.for being selected P.O.D.........THANKS FOR SHARING....FULL CREDIT
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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 November 2017
CONGRATS, Marieta, such a true Rhyme Royal poem, full of devotion, full of true love and above all full of sheer poetry in such impeccable english. You are one of a special kind, Marieta. Such a very interesting subject. I am happiest to know that your poem is called out as Poem of the Day. Best regards, sincerely Sylvia Frances Chan, poetess, evangelist and world traveler.
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017
I would understand that if you're no longer alive, it does not matter A real depiction of eternal love that conquers the fear f death. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Congrats for being picked POD. Subhas
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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2017
Your soul would penetrate totally my soul with your embrace- A great poem is selected as the poem of the day! Many congratulations! !
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Bharati Nayak 28 November 2017
When our Shining Sunbird into the horizon would fly and disappear And the sun would rise by reflecting a thousand colors in the water, By pervading a realm from our Empyrean dreams to dry the tear, I would understand that if you're no longer alive, it does not matter. - - Love is both divine and human.A wonderful poem of love, thanks for sharing.
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Tom Allport 28 November 2017
a poem with a quest to feel and be close to what can only be known as pure love? ...........wonderfully written Marieta
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 November 2017
Great write. Nice theme. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
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upendra majhi 28 November 2017
Excellent seeking of truth, God, love and exuberance of nature and the way four have one to one correspondence.Congratulations.
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Ramesh T A 28 November 2017
Congratulations to my esteemed poet friend Marieta Maglas! Se deserves to see her love poems ever on PH as Poem of the day!
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 June 2017
Kissing closed eyelids, caressing them with your tender hand. Always tossing in between these two worlds of virtual and real, enclosed beneath the souls entwined are u whispering with your beloved dear Marieta the Spitiual and human , the emotions, the embraces, kisses deep down in the soul. Jesus Christ.......his salvific act......... such a wonderful poem. i read it many times before i began to write this comment......... thank you dear poetess. tony
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Abderrahmane Dakir 25 January 2017
Wonderful Poem. Well done I would know how deep is your love. Thanks
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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2016
Kiss my soul! ! Nice piece of work.
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A wonderfully beautiful poem Marieta Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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Kevin Patrick 21 September 2016
As an embittered cynic who looks sometimes with skepticism of the nature of love, reading work like this reignites the fragile wick of my old battered candle in loves eternal light. Waking up with our ideas as enclosed beneath the souls entwined, Metamorphosing both of us, melting our inexpressible sorrow, We would awake for forgiveness, our glittering souls being absolved, I would know how deep is your love, I would have hope for tomorrow It takes committed passion to expose this revealing love.10+ x 10+ for great work.
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Ramesh T A 06 November 2015
Love only can kiss the soul by the will of God ever in the world life!
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Daniel Brick 23 June 2015
Your poem weaves a fabric of both eros and agape, which is truly the best of both possible worlds. And you do it quite effortlessly, with what Italians call SPREZZATURA (I don't speak Italian; I found that term in a book by Roberto Calasso who quoted Castiglione's definition: TRUE ART DOES NOT SEEM TO BE ART.) And indeed your poem has the intimacy of a whispered conversation of a couple who can say to each other KISS MY SOUL and YOUR SOUL WILL PENETRATE TOTALLY MY SOUL WITH YOUR EMBRACE. The trust that binds two people who can speak such tender words is itself a heavenly thing in an earthly context. It raises passion to a spiritual level so that spirituality and sensuality become equal partners. I like the image of OUR SHINING SUNBIRD which parallels the image of OUR GLITTERING SOULS. There is so much radiance throughout the poem that final image of the Sunbird's ascent is an ideal closing picture the reader like me internalizes. This is what love should bring into our lives - what the poet Matthew Arnold called SWEETNESS AND LIGHT. That's what you have given us.
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