Marieta Maglas

Gold Star - 10,040 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Kiss My Soul - Poem by Marieta Maglas

If that morning would be my ideal incredible readiness,
In a forgotten time of the tellurium and most desirable land,
Your certain love would come to utter my vivid happiness-
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Topic(s) of this poem: love, soul, god, kiss

Form: Rhyme Royal or Rime Royale


Comments about Kiss My Soul by Marieta Maglas

  • (9/30/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    The poem itself is a real kiss from start to finish. It has all the marks of a good hearted woman............ (Report)Reply

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  • Manuel Odeny (9/30/2009 6:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful piece Maglas. The blood of the lamb at the cross purifies. Love this simple lines laden with meditation:
    'Thrill as enclosed beneath heart intoned,
    Transfiguring me, yet melting all my sorrows,
    We would awake, your blue eyes being absolved,
    Proffering me the happiness and hope for tomorrow.'
    Congrats! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • (9/26/2009 5:41:00 PM)

    you have woven this poem in brilliance.................. (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (9/24/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    'Your soul would kiss my pain in defense, ..,

    much strength much comfort you derive from that kiss...a poem sweet tender and romantic...thanks...10
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  • (9/19/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    Awe I’m too to owe such lines to free my woes.
    Ten++
    dr. sakti
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  • (9/12/2009 2:15:00 AM)

    very beautiful and emotional poem. lucky is one who has someone to kiss the pain.
    very well chosen words and images.

    Mamta
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  • (9/5/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    I like this poem related to your sensitive heart Marieta.

    Nilufer Dursun
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  • (8/31/2009 4:37:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, nice choice of words, powerful metaphors, well -crafted all in all. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2009 12:45:00 PM)

    If that morning would be my real sadness,
    In a forgotten time of the most wanted land........ it is real sadness in most wanted time of the most wanted land.... it is so sad part... we thing of tomorow and better one.. very good poem.....10

    read mine pain... what if tomorrow...yes to to
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  • Harold K Schreiberg (8/26/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    Lord!
    How much I would have wanted the woman I loved to write such a poem!
    Only a woman can write this.
    Thank you so much for sharing...
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  • (8/23/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    Well and truly a shining marvel.
    Incredible indeed. A 10 for sure.
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  • Susan Jarvis (8/22/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    This is a beautifully crafted, expressive poem with an admirable array of wonderfully chosen words. The title enhances every affecting line. S :) (Report)Reply

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  • (8/22/2009 12:49:00 AM)

    very briilaint expression
    regards
    sandhya
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  • (8/21/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    A marvellous exciting poem, very nice and deep one, thank you very much, Marieta! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/21/2009 9:51:00 AM)

    In a way she felt the pangs of loneliness, but love in a form of a kiss soothed her to be relieved of pain. Good one, Marieta, don't listen to those who only live to talk trash. They fail to have something productive to share. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/19/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    So very beautiful.Everyone of your poems I've read are beautiful. (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/18/2009 4:15:00 PM)

    Both lips lock, saliva exchanging
    the toungue curvy
    playing merry go round
    crackering sound of the teeth
    a muse to the ears
    soul to soul
    eyes catching up
    blood travel million miles
    to create an eruption...........
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  • Miriam Maia Padua (8/17/2009 5:07:00 PM)

    runs with depth...with love..
    sends a great impact...poetic..
    sad, nice, lovely thoughts...Love is here..
    'virtual or real...i love this
    10+++

    lovelots,

    Maia
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  • (8/17/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    your words speak, and reach out

    I wonder what they talk about

    meanings so deep, that blessed are those few

    who get a chance to read you........

    Hats off.......
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  • (8/17/2009 3:30:00 AM)

    Lovely wordsmith........you have woven this poem in brilliance.......Thanks! ! ! (Report)Reply

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