Monday, July 30, 2012

Know That My Love Surrounds You Comments

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Something ails and
Troubles you tonight my love

Let me stay and
Hold you like a glove

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Harriet James
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Captain Cur 30 July 2012

or all will think I've gone cracked. I love this line. this fits in well with the body of the poem but upsets it just enough to grab interest.

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Enjoyed this, Harriet...Couplets work well here...Solid quilling! ~FjR~

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