Thursday, November 17, 2011

Last Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I met you last day for last time
You didn’t say good bye
You said farewell to your friends
But u didn’t take a chance with me

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COMMENTS
Sajna Kailas 20 November 2011

wow! nice it is.especially the last stanza is awesome! I am a traveller with a missing compass. this line is fantastic! composition is very good.loved it! ! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 17 November 2011

nice poem, well versed, full of emotion

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