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Let's Dance

Rating: 4.7

To live life as it is unfolding
under my nose
Right now

To accept myself as I really am
in the core of my being
Right now

To let go of the need to change the way I am
and love myself warts and all

Right now
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 04 March 2007

Angel Allie... a healing masterpiece... I needed this today... Uncertainty, the need for rhyme and reason rule me... Love you, thank you, Esther

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Anna Russell 04 March 2007

Yes, exactly Allie. An uplifting, affirmative piece that's just what I needed right now. Thanks for this. Hugs Anna xxx

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R H 28 February 2007

'Life - I offer you my hand Let's dance...' these final two lines speak volumes Allie. Dance away! Justine

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Duncan Wyllie 25 February 2007

One word and one word alone needed for this...............AMAZING! ! ! ! ! You really did it this time, Ahh! ...I could drink it in Thankyou so much, Love duncan X

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gone gone 25 February 2007

Dearest Allie You are the dancer and the dance....aglow with life and love....always....! ! Love, D, xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Sid John Gardner. 02 May 2009

Terrific stuff Ali.A wonderful poem.Inner peace is what we all aspire to.This poem catches that ideal.Just seen a dove land on top of my fountain.Sunning herself in the early morning warmth and splashing happily in the water.Somehow I assiciate that scene with this wonderful poem. Sid xx

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Fiona Davidson 02 May 2009

Wonderful imagery and fabulous phrasing Alison....Fi 10++++

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Francesca Johnson 06 May 2007

So many comments on this poem and all I can do is echo what's been said. This poem is YOU. A gloriously open-eyed piece, Allie. Love, Fran xxx

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Jim Foulk 03 April 2007

a beautiful piece of poetry and i love the title lets dance.

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David Dennis 05 March 2007

What a joyous notion that is. I'll stick that in my philosophy book for later, when I learn to dance. Nicely written too as usual.

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