Lies (The Mirror Sestet) Comments

You set yourself a challenge and you aced it. Reminds me of the Sestina. The very best one ever written is by Elizabeth Bishop. I plan to use her's when I have a Poetry Reading, coming up in Boonsboro, MD Library on Thur, Dec.13. Adeline

Deep meaning. Beautiful and artistic (drowning in my tears!) , I didn't know this style. Somehow close to cycle sonnets, but still different. Thank you.

a clever write with an easy flow. nice one.

You show you are writing about either yourself or someone who has been cheated upon by a person who said they loved you, then goes behind your back. I know how you feel it happened to me. My ex said he loved me then very seriously abused almost slit my throat. If it was about you it is good to write down to ease the pain. Great work

This is painful but all in all is so poetic and pure talent outstanding write.

Another great poem, pity this one is about something so bad. I like this style of poem. I might try it out myself ; P You, as a poet, are an inpiration to the rest of us. We don't know how strong we are until being strong is the only choice we have, and at the most important moments of our lives, we realise who are our friends and who loves us, and who never will. Tiana xx

Excellent write, great form and subject matter.

i agree with your notes. pretty simple poem with no hidden metaphors. so no grey hairs for me trying to figure out what this poem refers to. great work :)

stunning stunning

Liars are disgusting people that are so hateful. i hate their guts. this poem deliver a nice message with that meaning. the structure is as well as your previous works. nice and good. well done.