You... don't... want me...

Life! ! !

Life is pain
Life is sorrow
Life can always end tomorrow
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  • Luis Ruiz (10/9/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    this is a good poem about life....

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  • Deeba Naser (6/8/2009 1:20:00 PM)

    It is a fantastic peom! has true meaning, well done!

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (6/2/2009 2:23:00 AM)

    'Life is a circle going round and round
    Life continues after we’re in the ground…'

    Excellent write Janay. I love this poem.
    Beautiful observation on life.10 with love.

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  • Alison Cassidy (4/19/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    Your attitude toward life is very cynical for one so young, but your poem expresses your adolescent disappointment very well. Might I suggest you use the word 'beginning' instead of 'begin' in line four? Your final couplet is a most satisfying conclusion to the poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Angelica Skye (4/18/2009 8:51:00 PM)

    I like how on some of the lines it goes from a negative to a positive, it works well.x

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