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Life Ahead - Poem by doc dumb

Here when i m standing at life, s diversion,
n when i can see both past and future version.

I really dont know which path to choose,
it seems whichever i follow, m bound to loose.

Pressure is biggest guide at this stage of life,
hav to move against all temtations and drive.

And now when i look back at my childhood days..
i wish them to come back to me, in anyways.

The happiest days of life once i had...
ohhh i hav lost all of them, so bad....

The path ahead is so lonely and dark,
without a footprint or even a mark.

Its certainly gonna b tougher from here,
its always in my mind with an unknown fear.

How will i move tackling every odd..
help me, i m lost..... ohhh my GOD..


Comments about Life Ahead by doc dumb

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (3/6/2008 7:08:00 PM)


    This kind of feelings happen to every soul on earth at one stage. Well composed. (Report) Reply

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  • rajagopal haran (1/19/2008 3:37:00 AM)


    nice poem..keep posting (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2007 7:16:00 AM)


    he has already found you god lives here at poemhunter.. his other half that is bent on creating mischief lives with lesser gods and goddesses at poemhunter forum, only a click away..you will meet the caretaker his holiness trade martin in the sacristy...timings after midnight.. exocism, women worship dont miss..i am serious... (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2007 7:03:00 AM)


    keepin looking for God and he will find you, real to the point words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011


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