Very descriptive poem Dan! You take us to the battlefield! The quelling of one's fear is so well described...the need to continue, despite everything going on around this soldier, is very well depicted! Great job!
All of the hell our soldiers go thru while on the battle field and we treat them like second-class citizens when they return with the experience still fresh in their minds. The trenches that they experience the worst are the trenches they go thru when they come back home. Let's not treat our VETERANS this way! !
i like it cuz life is exactly like trenches. there is drama (bombs) , enemies (enemies) , fights (war) , and there will be atleast one person that will die of different things. and drugs or something else that is very different would to me be no man's land because you never kno wat could happen