Friday, February 5, 2010

Life's Murder Comments

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Poeple say god took you away
But it was life that took you on that horid day
I hear our song and think of your smile
Why can't you come back and stay awhile


confused teen
Adeline Foster 17 October 2011
I agree, it is a sad age in which to live such sorrow. Perhaps poetry offers some solace. I offer you mine to comfort you. Adeline
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Adam Reed 05 February 2010
revealin your emotions just a little at a time. not bad
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Daniel Trujillo 05 February 2010
you have REALLY GREAT poems... I know it's hard making a poem of something else, but these poems are just fantastic... But nobody should go through that...
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you know that's true. when you had someone you feel close to just dies or slips away. you think that's it life's over. but it's not. it just needs a little time. veary nice poem.
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