Tell me, O moisture
Halted in the eternity of my eyes
Which stagnant epoch has confined you!
God weeps rain
all addresses are beautiful esp.Tell me, O star on land
Dream about you?
This is a superb poem. A beautifully crafted ode to your lighthouse, lush with vibrant images that live on in memory long after the page has been turned. A highly romantic reflection on an ancient symbol of light and mystery:
halted in the eternity of my eyes...
O breeze of shores...
O sign of light...
O magical bird
Flying over the waning immensity of time...' You have certainly done your lighthouse justice, Naseer. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This is d makin of orginal mind. It truly moisten my burning heart.
My God Naseer this is wonderful a masterpiece no less.
its pricsless in terms of the thoughts and the beauty of the love.......Winnie
OMG I LOVE THIS IT WAS GOOD I LOVE IT SO
What a lovely, touching poem you've written. Ten is not really enough.
Another legendery poem,10+++
An extremly beautiful poem, feels like as if you have dived and brought the pearls from the depths of sea and woven this poem of those. Excellent work, greetings!
good words of wisdom Nazeer, very effectively presented...you v chosen words very appropriately/....god weeps in rain...very true indeed...I m very glad that yesterday god cried in merryment and send tears of ecstasy to srilanka...war is over at last....tiger and lion can walk in hand to hand..thanks 10+++
It´s so beautiful! The imagery... I Just loved it without any logical reasons, I like the way it sounds, the word choice...... know what? It touched me
It´s so.... let me put it this way: aristocratic!
it is wonderful. a lovely poem with a good discription.
An epic! Everytime I stop by poemhunter, I´ve got to hit one of your poems! I think I´m getting addicted to your style.10!
This truly is a wonderful poem and the relation to the holy spirit is evident starting with the title. I truly enjoyed it. I was impressed with the fellow poet's comment about some of your work possibly becoming classics. I am in agreement with Mr. Zuccaro. If a poet truly loves writing I think it should be a long range goal to have at least one of your pieces become a classic. I will continue to read your work.
This superb poem would go to my favourites just for these lines:
'Who told me in a drenched voyage
love is an island, grief the sail! ..'.
As a whole it bears hints of eternity which makes the soul fly over time. A true pleasure to read and think about!
Also reminded me of a song:
'Cause I was lost, somehow drifting away
Was almost gone, You brought me to life again
So let me be your lighthouse..'.
I liked this particular poem, it grabbed my heart when I read those words. Beautiful.
Good job, thanks.
I enjoyed reading this...thank you.
Well written. I liked the flow and the rhythm in the poem and the meaningful words
Naseer, you remind me of Shakesphere
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
10/25/2021 2:37:43 AM # 18.104.22.1688