Tuesday, October 18, 2011

' Like The Water Hyacinth ' Comments

Rating: 2.9

The water hyacinth
floats with flotsam and refuse
goes along so smooth

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Ency Bearis
COMMENTS
Hans Vr 29 October 2011

Water hyacinths are beautiful and you have expressed your appreciation of them in a very poetic and melodious way. Very well done, Ency.

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 October 2011

very true...very nice thoughts implies in a well constructed poem...

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its true nature just show things perfectly in order....while people make nature complicated by individual desires....

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