WES Vogler

Gold Star - 76,789 Points (May 3 1930 / Vancouver BC Canada)

(limerick) But I'm Telling You - Poem by WES Vogler

Of every five born, one's Chinese.
You've four siblings. So which then, of these?
They say it's Shang Loo,
But I'm telling you,
It's more likely that silly Louise.

Topic(s) of this poem: funny, people

Form: Limerick


Comments about (limerick) But I'm Telling You by WES Vogler

  • Kelly Kurt (4/22/2016 6:05:00 PM)


    I imagined longer hair, perhaps a hat, and a bigger smile. But the picture you have drawn here is from YOUR imagination and so it IS Louise (if you please) : -)
    I look forward to what others opine.
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  • Brian Mayo (12/9/2015 5:29:00 PM)


    it could be all four
    and in fact, even more
    Just look at Angelina Jolie's

    It practically wrote itself. No, I don't claim it's good.
    just participating
    :)
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    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (12/9/2015 6:42:00 PM)

    I don't know who Angelina Jolie is. so? ? ? ?

  • Brian Mayo (12/7/2015 12:47:00 PM)


    I wonder if there's some way you could use the name Angelina Jolies' (as in one of her children) in the last line? (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (12/7/2015 2:43:00 PM)

    It fits but I will leave that to you, your speciality being 'farout'

  • Rajnish Manga (12/7/2015 12:09:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem. Enjoyed its humour. Thanks. (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (12/7/2015 2:45:00 PM)

    thank you Rajnish .. a bit of silly

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2016


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