WES Vogler

Gold Star - 81,458 Points (May 3 1930 / Vancouver BC Canada)

(limerick) Capsulate Humans In Rockets - Poem by WES Vogler

When you capsulate humans in rockets,
Please try to supply them with lockets,
And a picture therein
Representing their kin,
Plus some pies, that are pork, in their pockets.

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Topic(s) of this poem: people

Form: Limerick

Comments about (limerick) Capsulate Humans In Rockets by WES Vogler

  • Bri Edwards (7/5/2016 9:46:00 PM)

    any kind of pie will do,
    but don't overdo the goo.
    and put in my space locket
    good old... Davey Crockett,
    'cause no other photo will do.

    nice one. i gave it 10. yours i mean.

    bri ;)
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  • (1/22/2016 8:47:00 PM)

    Cute limerick, but oh what a picture you have painted in my intellect! Ha Ha! Great limerick! I enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (1/23/2016 11:59:00 AM)

    thank you luv I hope you are following My Name Is Louise under limericks parts one thru seven now

  • Rajnish Manga (1/17/2016 12:15:00 AM)

    Just before going into the outer space;
    I have got back the smile on my face;
    With this kind of a wit,
    Easier will be my orbit,
    Barring pork, all else fits well into place.
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    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (1/17/2016 12:24:00 AM)

    I see someone has been studying the tuition. An excellent limerick and I shall expect many more they are addictive. We''ll start you off with an eight leaving room for improvement of rhythm.

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/26/2015 7:19:00 AM)

    An interesting Limerick.........................................7 (Report) Reply

  • Brian Mayo (11/24/2015 11:21:00 AM)

    I know it seems terribly cruel,
    But 'no pockets in space' is the rule
    Unzip one too fast
    And the experts forecast
    A black hole could emerge, you damn fool!
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    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (11/24/2015 11:45:00 AM)

    So write and post a batch of limericks I am just about the only one who is hooked on them I finally got The flawed antique watch into shape and will post it soon.

  • Pamela Sinicrope (11/13/2015 8:49:00 AM)

    I translated your limerick into RAP:

    Its just a sin
    Can’t find their kin
    Too far away
    Can’t get there in a day
    Give em some pork
    Don’t forget the fork
    Maybe a spork?
    Cause distance can’t buy
    Gonna bake till they fry
    Cause pork tastes better
    Encased in a letter
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    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (11/13/2015 2:01:00 PM)

    'Twas awfully kind of you but RAP I must eschew.
    With that ear I cannot wait until you start doing limericks hint hint

  • Darlene Walsh (11/12/2015 4:35:00 PM)

    LOL, entertaining limerick :)
    I'm not very familiar with limericks but I think I'm going to enjoy reading yours.

    Pork pies in rocket pockets
    I hope they don't mess the lockets
    To soil their kin would be a sin
    So pork pies may be better in a bin
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    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (11/12/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    Pork pies in rocket pockets
    I hope they don''t mess the lockets
    To soil their kin would be a sin
    So pork pies may be better in a bin

    Pork PIES in the POCKets in ROCKets? I HOPE they don't MESS up the LOCKets.
    Soiling KIN is a SIN.
    Keep the PIES in a BIN
    'Til the SHIP is once MORE in the DOCKets

    Here, in turn is your verse translated into limerick form.
    I have marked the beat with capital letters.
    Reading out loud tells you whether the beat works.
    Excellent vehicle for learning the limerick form since the original version is yours.

  • Melvina Germain (10/30/2015 8:00:00 AM)

    Smooth flowing Limerick and the imagery is vivid...very nice indeed..... (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (10/31/2015 3:06:00 AM)

    Thank you, my fellow Canadian

  • Kelly Kurt (10/29/2015 10:51:00 PM)

    **~~~ Funny. Thanks, Wes (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (10/31/2015 3:05:00 AM)

    Thanks Kelly

  • Gajanan Mishra (10/29/2015 10:38:00 PM)

    very fine supply them with lockets. (Report) Reply

    Wes Vogler Wes Vogler (10/31/2015 3:07:00 AM)

    More limericks coming up Gajanan thank you

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 11, 2015

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