Loke Kok yee

Limerick-Senior Citizens - Poem by Loke Kok yee

Senior citizens must take great care while driving
Their reflexes are slow and their eyesight wanting
But this one drove at high speed
When caught he did loudly plead
For even a driver's license he was lacking

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick-Senior Citizens by Loke Kok yee

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/21/2015 10:30:00 AM)

    Laws are needed everywhere! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (11/29/2015 11:29:00 PM)

    Ha...... Ha! Beautiful limerick! He is to be severely penalized for violating all traffic rules! (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/24/2015 9:18:00 AM)

    Driving where? may be in dreams.Ha ha, , Good one as usual. Thanks 10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2015 4:56:00 AM)

    Amusing yet realistic write. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2015 3:42:00 AM)

    I was about to write how sad your poem made me feel until I scrolled down and saw the monkey in the drivers seat...lol. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/23/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    30 days in the zoo for him. : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/23/2015 1:01:00 AM)

    Wow... a senior citizen on the wheel (caught on camera) - should be allowed to drive without license (in the jungle) . Thanks, kok yee. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 28, 2017

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