David Floren

Line Break Liner Notes

Our lives, our souls – they're
Actually down here,
hard-returned.
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  • Aaron Eliad (2/8/2008 10:56:00 PM)

    Interesting concept how we all have the epicureal predisposition to life that we can't shake. Brilliant.

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  • Fred Babbin (1/27/2008 8:19:00 PM)

    I have a hard time with some of the words as well as the way they are grouped, so it doesn't really touch me. You're trying to say something, but I don't know what.

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