Wednesday, November 11, 2009

Little Kingdom Comments

Rating: 4.3
Agile ants building colonies
Busy bees buzzing honey hives
Beetle bugs grinding green leaves
Brown butterflies feasting on flowers


Vijay Sai
Kelvin Owusu 03 December 2012
a wonderful poem, a nice descriptions of a world most don't pay mind to
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Terry O'leary 04 November 2012
Beautiful description of the 'underworld'... Terry
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Frank Okoth 27 August 2012
Your kind of poetry i like, just take ur pen n paper and write on whatever interesting you see around you, not whatever you feel within you... Great poet :)
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Jon Terry 28 July 2012
Vijay, First of all thank you for inviting me to read this piece, it really is a wonderful and truthful way of expressing the realisation that your garden is truly a little kingdom, as much goes on in it as in our own human part of this planet and you have expressed it marvellously in your writing. Great work and I will be adding you to my friends list now to see what else your pen creates Peace Jon
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Well written with the beginning of the alphabet orders in every stanza.10+
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Louis Cecile 28 July 2012
Some nice imagery used and with such a brief insight it asks for more expansion. Well versed overall.
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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010
Unfortunately many city dwellers are locked and jailed between concrete floors in cramped Flat, unable to see even sun at anytime in a day. They can at least enjoy this poem. Nice kingdom. Convey my best wishes to the subjects of your little kingdom.
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Pamela Lutwyche 16 May 2010
Your kingdom sounds a very Interesting place to be.
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Nithya Raghavan 10 March 2010
that was a lovely little kingdom that you created with your verse! keep it up!
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Jasbir Chatterjee 05 March 2010
Lovely poem! You are lucky to have such a wonderful kingdom, we miss sights like these in a city like Delhi...
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such colorful and happy imagery nature is. Your poem is like a nature shot taken by a natural artist. Thank you, Izzey Strange
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Adam Reed 02 March 2010
NICE DUDE! ! im liking the alliteration its pretty cool lol
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Gautam Sen 25 February 2010
So that was of birds, now insects - this poem has covered more in numbers of the world of insects. If that was world of wings then this is a little kingdom of insects on earth. A poem of your good observation. Thanks for sharing. Gautam
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Braja K Sarkar 22 February 2010
Descriptive poem but nice to read. It seems that poet is a lover of Nature, even the lives of small insects are observed carefully.But I prefer to feel the inner poetic feelings of the poem...Thanks..
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Richelle Barrameda 21 February 2010
love it! you know what to do and you do it well.. please continue writing poems like this. :)
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Jude Thadeus 21 February 2010
It's a wounderful poem. I love that cos its all about nature. Nature is life.
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Jihene Khammassi 20 February 2010
Dear Vijay I noticed that u like to link this poem to 'World Of wings' and I think that is because of the perfectly elaborated, poetic and skilled writing of both poems! The little kindom has become an animal opus so natural and so original, all at once! Good luck, Jihene
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blank blank 20 February 2010
I like this one most Mystery millipedes moving in millimeters
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Seth Mutau 19 February 2010
wow, great way of decribing your little garden kingdom in a poem...awesome staff thumbs up...
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CourtneyJae noggle 16 February 2010
it is very creative i agree.. so many little details which is good for poems describing things such as your 'garden' or you 'little kingdom'
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