Sunday, March 4, 2018

Long Distance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh winter how soon you will leave me
How soon you'll bereave me
And though I'll remember your seasonal sights,
your evergreens and birches converging for miles

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Daniel Bourke
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 04 December 2018

To fashion you into some tangible thing Some newlywed's ring, attached to a finger That I may look down and remember you - winter.........Winter as a symbol.. love and marriage, and wedding ring, sadness, romance......... so many points the reader has to derive from your poem. a very nice poem very original. thank u. tony

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