Kranthi Pothineni


Longing - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

In hours of longing
Nights passed in singing
Days went dragging
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  • (8/6/2009 1:43:00 AM)

    longing a beautiful write and longing for her is great.............. (Report)Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (8/5/2009 3:15:00 AM)

    An everlasting longing emerging from the rhyme and rhythm of love.......10. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    I totallly loved the flow of this poem...10s (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    a genuine heart speak of the truth....all have experienced what emotion affect
    our soul...it did struck my heart....a poem that touches each soul to survive...
    a very unforgivable feeling of distress of one own life to stand in the limbo of
    death and life......thank you for sharing this poem, God bless.....a 10 +++
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  • (8/3/2009 10:54:00 PM)

    longing is a feeling that endures.here it is amusing too.
    'In hours of longing
    Salt was my eating
    Sweet was my dreaming
    My dreams kept falling
    My longing is undying '
    well written
    voted10
    surya
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  • Louis Rams (8/3/2009 7:16:00 PM)

    i long for life
    i long for sleep
    a long for food to eat.

    this is what we can expect in this life- the longing.

    good write a ten
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  • (8/3/2009 6:25:00 PM)

    In hours of longing
    Salt was my eating
    Sweet was my dreaming
    My dreams kept falling
    My longing is undying

    such a sad theme this is my friend....fine imageries with a clear distinct views and opinion of longing....rhymes all over that made the poem fantastic though not really heartfelt since it's full concentration was in the rhyme ends...Thanks! ! !

    Wishing you best! ! !
    CT
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  • (8/3/2009 11:44:00 AM)

    When you long for something, you have that uneasy feeling of not achieving that.
    But It's a driver for excellence. A human being comfortable and satisfied has no initiative. good write....
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  • (8/3/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    As long as life last, longing last in an ordinary man, saints are exception no longing no pain.........a good write..... (Report)Reply

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  • (8/3/2009 10:32:00 AM)

    brilliantly written as always! ! ! ! ! ! !
    you are amazing when it comes to putting words together! !
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/3/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    Longing is the recourse of life!

    sweet 'ing' chorous!

    10+
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  • (8/3/2009 8:50:00 AM)

    We all have longings in life. Though they are only temporal. (Report)Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (8/3/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    you built a cresendo and...last but not the least....but the best
    In hours of longing
    Salt was my eating
    Sweet was my dreaming
    My dreams kept falling
    My longing is undying


    well written
    cheers
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  • (8/3/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    nice portrait, well written poem.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/3/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    I know this feeling sir! ! ...

    'In hours of longing
    Lips were drying
    Drums were dying
    Hope was crying
    Heart kept breaking'

    and i feel you'v written this one with so much emotion..
    Simple but very free flowing write....
    Moving one...

    I honestly don't know wehter longing is a good thing or a bad thing..
    But we long for so many things aren't we? .....


    nice write.

    with loves
    shan
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