Wednesday, September 12, 2018

Lost To Me. Comments

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We knew the forecast,
a storm on the horizon
was headed this way.
A storm raging in the sky.


Carl Roussell
Perdita Young 13 September 2018
A cyclone circling our fears. - The line just haunts my mind, and the progress of the storm and the damages it's brought on its way is so vividly depicted...Awesome!
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Carl Roussell 13 September 2018
Thank you Perdita for the read and comment. I have been enjoying your writings in return. Have a good day and a good day writing.
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Aqua Flower 12 September 2018
This is very deep and powerful write. I like the line you chose cyclone of fears. Very appropriate at descibing weather and how it affects life and emotions. Kumarmani's comment is right on point on this one! I ditto his comment as well!
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Carl Roussell 12 September 2018
Thanks for the comment. For some the fear of a weather event is not as great as the storm in one's own mind.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018
A storm which appears in the horizon affects life in Earth. Sometimes weather gives mental illness. Cyclone circles your fear. But we hope this fear will go away with weather change. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. Loneliness will go away and love and peace will bloom soon.
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Carl Roussell 12 September 2018
Thanks for reading the poem. I do agree with your comment, yet many are not able to find their way to happiness.
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