A profound poem on love, worth reading and reciting several times!
'Love is like an open blue sky,
'Where thousands of stars twinkle and smile
Brightly and beautifully, at the same time! ' - Yes, so beautifully said!
The last stanza is the kernel of the poem, to which I fully agree.
The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I heartily give it: 5 Stars *****!
Very true. The poet Dr. Geeta Radhakrishna, is such a, gem of a, human being which is very evident in each stanza, of the poem. The poet in this poem expresses the fact that rrespective of caste or creed, people craves for love not for money, food or shelter which since, through love, all the other material aspects can be attained.This compassionate, kind and considerate, poet who is, so tolerant..Marvellous. No words to describe. Best of luck to the poet.
The transition of metaphors in each stanza is so mesmerising. Especially the stanzas where each religion is used. This shows that love is not only for one religion or person but for everyone
The length of the poem did justice to the topic because love is such a beautiful emotion that it is impossible to describe its true feeling with few words or sentences
Love is all embracing
Love that does not confine nor is confined,
To any shape size or structure,
Not a square, rectangle or triangle,
It is not like a street
Ending in a narrow lane,
Or a one-way street with a blind end.
It is not a box that can be shut and locked,
That remains safe and secure in a bank locker.
Love is like an open blue sky,
Where thousands of stars twinkle and smile
Brightly and beautifully, at the same time!
This is my favourite stanza
jab pyaar dil se hota hai
har cheez sweekaar ho jaati hai
kyon k ye shudh hota hai
bulandi pe uDta hai
behti nadia ki tarah
hamesha behta rehta hai
bharay behtay dariya ki tarah
pyaar ka amrit pilaata rehta hai
badan k har cell se
skin k har pore se
dil ki gehraareeoN se
pyaar ubar-ubar kar aata hai
aur apni mehak
saaray sansaar main bikhaar jaata hai!
The honorable poet has penned very well. The poem is a great work of the poet. Analytically, the poet proved the point about the depth and the truth of love. This masterpiece poem is both academic and inspirational. Thanks for sharing. ++10
Lord's love is always beautiful and we feel this continuously. His love embraces you and me. We are in same way to chant Krishna's name and adore his quality. We live for Krishna and he is for us to guide. This poem is very lovely..10+
Love has to be shared,
Love has to be offered,
Love has to be showered,
Continuously and graciously,
Generously and universally,
Into the wide, wide world!
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