Friday, November 20, 2015

Love And Art Comments

Rating: 4.5
When your love is returned with love,
there's no story.
When your love isn't returned,
a story starts.

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Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS
Wes Vogler 26 November 2015
When my lover is displeased there is no such thing as art. If mama ain't happy ain't nobody happy. And yet she allows the illusion that I lead in all things. This is called a marriage. Nicely written ta
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Mj Lemon 26 November 2015
A remarkable poem. You've really tapped into what moves and motivates the forces of creativity.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015
Love is returned with love in interesting story and beautiful poem drafted well with interesting mind. Nicely penned love poem...10
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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015
Ultimately what u get in return is important and always matter. A thought provoking poem on love.
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Loke Kok Yee 21 November 2015
Those who have known hunger appreciates food better thanks -10
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Kelly Kurt 20 November 2015
I too find that pain at least slightly trumps other emotions as the one that spawns greater creativity
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Douglas Scotney 20 November 2015
What a pest that in suffering is our best.
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