anushmadhu P.Bharathi

Love And Five Elements - Poem by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

When I glanced the Sky,
A shooting star
Lashed my eyes;

When I touched
The small Rain
Like a tree
A flash of Lightning
Pricked my finger.

As you dash me
Like a Wind,
I felt a turbulent river
For a minute in my vein
Which broke the Rock into smithereens;

Gave up all for you
As I saw you in all
Five Elements

(In Tamil- Mazhaippen-Kavigar.Phazhani Bharathi)

Comments about Love And Five Elements by anushmadhu P.Bharathi

  • (1/20/2010 1:50:00 AM)

    Very deep and nice i love the idea of it and its done very good (Report) Reply

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  • (12/23/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    awesome metrics of words (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 15, 2010

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