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Tuesday, March 14, 2017

Love And Lust Comments

Rating: 4.2
Love and lust are poles apart.

Lust is chaos, love is art.

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Jazib Kamalvi
COMMENTS
Mahinda Abeysinghe 20 January 2021
Personally, I feel that it could have been better and stronger in a shorter version since the contrast between love and is negated with the last three lines. The element of surprise at the end, however, make the poem very interesting.
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Mashiur Rahman 08 January 2021
How nice the shape of the poem and i enjoy the sweet poem. Nice
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 January 2021
Dear Mashiur Rahman! Thank you so much for your nice support.
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Agbaje Samson 29 December 2020
you wrote well
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 January 2021
You commented well. Thank you so much.
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Thomas Northcross 19 December 2020
You nailed it. So many mistake for love. The line that I really recognized, Love demands the inner beauty, while is only searching outer beauty. Thank you for Sharing your heart.
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 December 2020
Dear Thomas Northcross! Your words are really precious for me. Thank you so much.
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Harshita Chaudhary 06 December 2020
The contrast is shown in a really wonderful way. Great work
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2020
Dear Harshita Ch.! I am grateful for your kind words.
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Lea Jean Sumayan 02 December 2020
wow. brilliant poem.
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2020
Dear Lea Jean Sumayan! Thank you so much for your nice visit and kind words.
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Ifeanyi John Nwokeabia 02 December 2020
God is love. This is beautiful. I love the comparison used.
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2020
Dear Ifeanyi! Thank you so much for your nice comment.
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Martin Greyford 30 November 2020
A masterpiece piece of art in written form. Well constructed trying to separate the two word's love n. Bravo amazing can't stop reading it.5 stars +++
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2020
Dear Martin! Thank you so much for your lovely poetic support and kind appreciation.
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Javed Iqbal 29 November 2020
Its superb. I enjoyed it. thanks
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2020
Dear Javed Iqbal! Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
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Amir Marandi 28 November 2020
Magnificent comparative piece. Very thoughtful.
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2020
Dear Amir! Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Cliff Ceekay 27 November 2020
Masterpiece! ! .. keep the ink dripping...
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 November 2020
Dear Cliff Cheekay! Thank you so much for your nice poetic comment.
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Terrell Yaangi 27 November 2020
Beautiful poem, indeed.
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 November 2020
Dear Terrell! Thank you very much for your words.
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Muhammad imtiaz Ali Asad 27 November 2020
A beautiful composition with a solid message.
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 November 2020
Dear Muhammad Imtiaz Ali Asad! Thank you very much for your lovely support.
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Shonkhoneel Chowdhury 26 November 2020
Very thoughtful Jazib. Nice one!
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 November 2020
Dear Shonkhoneel! Thank you very much for your nice comment.
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Maria Mitea 21 November 2020
Insightful write, K!
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2020
Hummm! K! Thank you so much for your kind K, Dear Maria Mitea.
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Indika Thushara Gamage 17 November 2020
such a marvelous poem...well done..
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2020
Dear Indika! Thank you very much for your kind words.
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Mona Rene Riel 08 November 2020
Written for the inner love you may have had. I like the poem M. Rene Riel
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 November 2020
Dear Rene! Thank you so much for your nice support.
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Sana Ashher 06 November 2020
Seems like this poem is a message to someone. ’My subject is thy subject’
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 November 2020
Oh yes! To humanity Of course
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Sana Ashher 06 November 2020
Who are you
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 November 2020
Umm! Sapiens I think
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Sukumar Choudhuri 28 October 2020
Nice poem on Love Thanks a lt for sharing such a beautiful poem
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 October 2020
Dear Sukumar Ch. Thank you so much for your lovely support.
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