Love And Passion Poem by Marieta Maglas

Love And Passion

Rating: 5.0


Imperceptible, surviving with no time and space
Or maybe surviving at another thrilling dimension
Love has its distinct meanings and its grace
For melting cloud slashed sunset, in sweet detention


Always wondering about the uncertainty of life
Passion is like going to the window to yell
Carrying oxygenated blood, leading always to strife
It needs the scorpion because they are friends in hell.


Creating a spiritual awakening, without loving intent
Against love which transcends all logic and time.
Engulfed in flames, burning red hot mental torment
Blue ocean and thirst for the truth lasting a lifetime


Like a Caribbean Dream, settlement of Rainbow Bay
Is the perfect love transcending logic being so strong
That no malfeasance act nor hate can destroy it one day
It bespeaks no selfishness, it can endure for long..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 19 April 2010

10 points very poetic wow...nice flow to go along with it...

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 April 2010

Wondering always about the uncertainty of life...... well written but I feel my problem is different. If the first word of the line would be WANDERING then it would be of my. Really I can't bear the wonders in uncertainity. Rather can be the puppet on the hand of uncertain............... 10+ pranab

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Sarah Jane 25 April 2010

very well written poem

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Seema Chowdhury 02 May 2010

very interesting poem. i really enjoyed. you selection of words are excellent.

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Lady Grace 03 May 2010

my goshhhhhhh...so nice... carribean dreams will fall on southseas and will rise again in the heart to where love and passion takes place...ilike the words u used..so gentle and kind, so sweet and smart...

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 November 2016

Hi Marieta, How true! True Love knows no selfishness!

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Eric Cockrell 22 July 2011

very well done... love beyond selfishness... becomes what it is! good poem!

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Mary Thomson 20 April 2011

You did great on this. very good and well expressed

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Chris Jibero 10 October 2010

A good poem.Love without passion is pale.

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Chidiebere Franklin 20 September 2010

this is a great poem dear.i really like it huh.good work

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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