Prof Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty
INDIA
Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Love & Deceit Comments

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Moon has gone black-spotted,
By Sun’s love that is deep-hearted.

But Sun has always anger carrying with,

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Prof Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty
COMMENTS
Thus Sun learnt the art of deceit, It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays And goes with the twilight. the description similar like a melting snow.......candle wax....... the finite line sun to go away with twilights is very impressive to read and feel! !
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Minu Alex 11 October 2011
Sometimes love is like that..It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays And goes with the twilight.
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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 27 February 2008
Better times to this love of your so wondrously spun poem & better luck to love's intrinsic magic seed next time around, when Sun and Moon again shack up under a more harmonious cosmic sway.
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