Monday, March 16, 2009

Love Is Trust Comments

Rating: 4.4

Love is trust
even when it comes to lust.
That feeling of butterflies
dont make up for all your lies.


Alexandria Valena
Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

This is well put. Bien!

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Love and trust are bonded together. Cant have one without the other. Well penned and enjoyed the poem. Well done

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Reetessh Sabrr 16 April 2009

Alex..u have done magic by this...Have read so many poems on Love but this one has seeped inside me...I donno whats the magic..its simple yet every word counts to the reality.. I think this is your best poem.

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passion davis 01 April 2009

gul i love this poem you are a great poet :)

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Laron Green Sr. 01 April 2009

good job, you are right, just want to be held tight! ! !

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Honest Heart 20 March 2009

a wonderful piece of work. Very nicely done! that one really spoke out the most to me, you have a great talent of speaking to your readers. niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice! ! ! go on! ! !

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I like your definition of love in this piece.

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