Saturday, December 30, 2017

Love Me Winter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stopping the driver at lights
I'm fishing around in my pocket for fives
With only the winter in mind

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Daniel Bourke
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2018

spending a night with stars, and that too in winter........ nature lover are u. imagination and poetic thoughts and conception. thank u. tony

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Marieta Maglas 19 April 2018

To spend such a night with the stars - beautifully written poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 February 2018

The clouds have a glow that an Inuk would know I'm bracing for snow Adjusting my wools till they're snug at my throa.....spending such a night with the stars.............fine.. alone in winter nights seeking its joys and sucking its beauty. very fine poem dear poet. tony

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Gene S 14 February 2018

Thank you very kindly, I'm glad you can relate! That's my only wish

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 December 2017

Write comment. A good start, Daniel. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Alison Mujati 30 December 2017

Good poem and you can do better

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