Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (9/25/2020 1:12:00 AM)

It created a zillion wavelets of joy
And my mind danced in timeless rhythm!

Wonderful love poem so beautifully penned. Loved it dear Valsa....5 Stars

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Kumarmani Mahakul (9/22/2020 6:00:00 PM)

How does love spark is well illustrated in this poem by you. It begins from eyes. It may be cited...As our eyes met, sparks of love emitted / Emotions swelled, passions surged
Like a well full to the brim / A tear drop glistened in your eyes. Beautifully put. Graphic attached. Full to full...five stars.

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Mahtab Bangalee (9/22/2020 6:48:00 AM)

when come
eyes to eyes
hands to hands
smiles to smiles
breaths to breaths
so near, so near......

then neither she
nor me
no duality there is

love
lives
as ONE
in silent peace

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Rose Marie Juan-austin (9/21/2020 8:50:00 PM)

A very lovely poem full of passion
and deep emotions.
It depicts a strong affection between two
people and who care deeply for each other.
Beautifully crafted with
compelling imagery.
Five Stars! ! !

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Anjandev Roy (9/21/2020 5:50:00 AM)

...........danced in timeless rhythm............wonderful......thank u....anjandev roy.

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Varsha M (9/21/2020 1:20:00 AM)

Ma'am this is splendid. A drop in eye turning to zillion wavelets yet to be born quenching every emotions I lived to see it materialize under the sun that gives light. Touched the heart.

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Rajnish Manga (9/21/2020 1:11:00 AM)

Dazzling images of love expressed through emotional vibes.
This small poem enchants with its irresistible spell. Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion (9/21/2020 12:20:00 AM)

A well penned poem.
Truly lovely and pretty....5 stars +++

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Khairul Ahsan (9/21/2020 12:18:00 AM)

What a beautiful description of a moment when pairs of eyes emitted sparks of love through a teardrop that 'created a zillion wavelets of joy'!
The graphic is beautiful too!
'And my mind danced in timeless rhythm! ' - Oh yes, it must be so!
The poem gets full marks from me,5/5!

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Kostas Lagos (9/21/2020 12:15:00 AM)

Well composed poem Valsa!

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Robert Murray Smith (9/21/2020 12:04:00 AM)

A truly romantic write.

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