Amy Ormonde

Rookie (January 13 1991 / Nancy, France)

Love Thrown Away - Poem by Amy Ormonde

How are things this difficult
once so serene and free
now buried in a guilt ridden stream

Why are you so tempting
the lust I feel for you regreting

Who is this your trying to be
why are you trying to be somthing your not just for me

dont change
dont hesitate
dont begin to belong to something you hate

Stop It
Youll see
I dont like what your doing to me

Im leaving
im gone

Stop being an ass
stop trying to show off
its killing what we had
what we fought so hard to keep

Your drowning me your overbearing
back off
step away
I cant stand to let you see this pain

the tears
the surrendering

what happend to you
why are you acting this way
why cant you see what your throwing away

Just stop it
please listen

Step back
walk away
take another look
at the love your throwing away.

Comments about Love Thrown Away by Amy Ormonde

  • Shekhar Joshi (6/20/2009 2:08:00 PM)

    nicely done........sad stuff.......hurts when someone u love suddenly changes to a complete different personality.......

    Good work... ;)
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  • (6/19/2009 9:52:00 AM)

    Very good poem who ever hurt you needs to learn that love is not something you just can give away i hope that u can get a chance and read some of my poems they're just like yours i understand where your coming from and if you ever need someone to talk to i am here (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2009 8:20:00 AM)

    Pain is not just wrote its felt....
    And you make it feel..
    Wonderful words...
    Hope to hear more of ur words....^_^
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  • (6/19/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    this is excellent.. give him a second chance though.. i think its him seeing you as perfect and well, nervousness tend ot get to a guys when he see hte one he considers perfect. he make just be trying to get yo your level.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    it's really well written poem and you expressed yourself very professional being a good poetess.. I liked it very much specially this stanza...
    Stop being an ass
    stop trying to show off
    its killing what we had
    what we fought so hard to keep
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  • (6/18/2009 9:28:00 AM)

    it's gorgeous poem. well done (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    Your heart expresses the pain of forgiveness..repeatidly giving chances for your heart to heal...yet..the other does not respond to your's written very have soul...and thats what write lines that pull at the heart....keep penning you have a gift...don't worry about the flow...that will come with experience...your writing ability is it grow (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 8:35:00 AM)

    my fav out of yours, I think.
    The half dialogue style suits it- disarrayed, fragmented.
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  • (6/17/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    Hy babe excellent. I pleased. Bt how u think that i can judge in ur poems as i m alsy a new poet. Though i coment bt if i mistakes pardon me. Thx. If u can u may read my poems also and coment plz. Tata. (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    poem is good, but i feel the flow is little messy, but still the idea behind it seems good... (Report) Reply

  • Kyle Jones (6/17/2009 8:46:00 AM)

    It's quite a good poem, the attitude is there but I feel it's lacking in the sense of desperation, but perhaps that wasn't your initial theme. either way I find it very beautifuly done and hope to read more (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 17, 2009