Amy Ormonde
<font color= red>Nancy, France
Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Love Thrown Away

Rating: 4.5
How are things this difficult
once so serene and free
now buried in a guilt ridden stream
Why are you so tempting
the lust I feel for you regreting

Who is this your trying to be
why are you trying to be somthing your not just for me

dont change
dont hesitate
dont begin to belong to something you hate

Stop It
Youll see
I dont like what your doing to me

Im leaving
im gone

Stop being an ass
stop trying to show off
its killing what we had
what we fought so hard to keep

Your drowning me your overbearing
back off
step away
I cant stand to let you see this pain

the tears
the surrendering

what happend to you
why are you acting this way
why cant you see what your throwing away

Just stop it
please listen

Step back
walk away
take another look
at the love your throwing away.
Amy Ormonde
Shekhar Joshi 20 June 2009
nicely done........sad stuff.......hurts when someone u love suddenly changes to a complete different personality....... Good work... ;)
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Keith Young 19 June 2009
Very good poem who ever hurt you needs to learn that love is not something you just can give away i hope that u can get a chance and read some of my poems they're just like yours i understand where your coming from and if you ever need someone to talk to i am here
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Furqan Asad 19 June 2009
Pain is not just wrote its felt.... And you make it feel.. Wonderful words... Hope to hear more of ur words....^_^
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this is excellent.. give him a second chance though.. i think its him seeing you as perfect and well, nervousness tend ot get to a guys when he see hte one he considers perfect. he make just be trying to get yo your level..
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Alex Andreev 18 June 2009
it's gorgeous poem. well done
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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2009
Your heart expresses the pain of forgiveness..repeatidly giving chances for your heart to heal...yet..the other does not respond to your's written very have soul...and thats what write lines that pull at the heart....keep penning you have a gift...don't worry about the flow...that will come with experience...your writing ability is it grow
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I Am Charlie 18 June 2009
my fav out of yours, I think. The half dialogue style suits it- disarrayed, fragmented.
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Katu Roy 17 June 2009
Hy babe excellent. I pleased. Bt how u think that i can judge in ur poems as i m alsy a new poet. Though i coment bt if i mistakes pardon me. Thx. If u can u may read my poems also and coment plz. Tata.
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poem is good, but i feel the flow is little messy, but still the idea behind it seems good...
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Kyle Jones 17 June 2009
It's quite a good poem, the attitude is there but I feel it's lacking in the sense of desperation, but perhaps that wasn't your initial theme. either way I find it very beautifuly done and hope to read more
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