Loving You Poem by Linda Batchelder

Loving You

Rating: 5.0


Loving you is watching
The sun dance on water
Like endless acres of diamonds
On a golden summer morning.

Loving you is walking
Through a candlelit cathedral
In silent prayer.

Loving you is the feel
Of a gentle breeze, and
The cool green grass
Beneath my feet.

Loving you is being surrounded
By the quiet beauty
Of great works of art.

Loving you is the sound
Of a waterfall,
Or the sight of a rainbow.

Loving you is running through
Bright hillsides of autumn, and
Breathing in their earthy scents.

Loving you is the joy
In the eyes of a child
On their birthday.

Loving you is standing
In the middle of a sun shower,
Arms outstretched.

Loving you is awakening
To the first snow of winter,
And the crisp clean air
Of early dawn.

Loving you is the returning
Of birds
And the first buds of spring.

Loving you
Is the memory
Of home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Violet Llewellyn 11 February 2007

This is awesome! It makes you think about what love is really supposed to be like. -Storm

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Jamie Stevenson 04 September 2020

" Loving you is standing; In the middle of a sun shower, Arms outstretched." A powerful image! I like the 4 line to 3 line changing structure.

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Marci Made 20 June 2007

This is absolutely magnificent, it should be a song. Could almost make one willing to take a chance on love yet again.~~~~marci. :)

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Geoff Warden 11 February 2007

Very nicely put! ! a ten for this devotional piece

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Claude Davis III 11 February 2007

Very sweet...I like it. You named so many things that people over look... the sun on the water...the first snow... great poem....10 Claude

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Roger Bowman 11 February 2007

I agree with Storm Take care Linda Roger

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Linda Batchelder

Linda Batchelder

Trenton, Ontario Canada
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