Sylvia Chidi

Freshman - 543 Points (Germany)

Lust, Lust, Lust - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

He lusts for her
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/28/2014 12:25:00 AM)

    Her apple breast
    Beneath her vest
    Has just put him to the test
    The sweet fluid of sex
    Displaying something complex
    A beautiful lusty poem on lust.A double edged weapon cuts from both sides.Lovely
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • (4/12/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    I lust for the fluid of your pen
    Give it to me
    Till I come all over
    As a great poet.
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  • Reyvrex Questor Reyes (10/7/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    You have really shown a good picture of apple breast.....err, lust. Here's what I can add:

    Virtue And The Beast

    To run, we could from threats besetting us
    But naught we do for demons from within
    Their obstacles laid on the paths we pass
    Dictate the rise and fall our lives contain

    Virtue does to a woman bind desire
    When dreams of wayward thrills it would suppress
    As though alarm when hearts are set afire
    It screams out loud should she unzips her dress

    Monsters and ghouls are far removed in woods
    If there be what the heart so truly dreads
    In man is beast lurking in murky moods
    Knows many arms and sleeps in many beds.
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  • (4/7/2010 2:54:00 PM)

    definatly wasn't wordsworth but really made my day and thats really wat poetry is about (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2007 12:01:00 PM)

    apple breast? kinda weird. but whatev. (Report) Reply

  • (3/3/2007 8:58:00 AM)

    i love the flow to your poem..and its so real (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2006 2:43:00 PM)

    I loved your poem, excellent job! (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2006 11:25:00 AM)

    This poem of yours has given me the biggest grin today Sylvia. You do have a wonderfully insightful way with words. 10 from lusty apple flavour Tai (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2006 10:29:00 AM)

    Clever, insightful, well-imaged, sharp word play - a super poem. Kind regards, Gina. (Report) Reply

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