Machine 420: Destroying Lies Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Machine 420: Destroying Lies

Rating: 5.0


Works on manual/auto mode
switch the power

Display: list of lies
History: stores fakes
Recalling: fabrication

420 hp engine
operates in
solar battery
noiseless
portable
handy
ready-to-use

How it works:

lies flying in air
soluble in water
buried in ground
deleted in second.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2009

Your wording nice that blooming to take me onto new dimension! -->powerful! 10+

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Ted M 14 August 2009

You are a marketing genius. Re-packing a product and delivering in unique style. 10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 15 August 2009

A distinct way of displaying in the open, white lies used by marketers, but in a hyperbolic marketing statement that tends to demote a product, not promote it. Very imaginative.

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Zeinab Sherif 15 August 2009

i like this poem it's a new idea & an imaginary one.

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a unique poem and i think many of whom control the world carry this machine..loved this poem and your creative idea...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 August 2009

very intense. You share your emotions!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 August 2009

lovely idea...hope we had one such

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Luwi Habte 17 August 2009

well penned as a sort of poem, it is so very nice Luwi

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Surya . 17 August 2009

well imagined and written.420 and lie go together.such people are normaly in high places well done surya

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