Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Maiden Voyage Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is our maiden voyage
A journey to the stars
You, I and the vast ocean blue
Forecast: smooth sailing as far as the eye can see

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Yoni Assis
COMMENTS
Jazib Kamalvi 27 April 2018

Very impressive write, Yoni Assis. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 January 2016

Very enticing and romantic, a voyage of first love sounds so alluring, would love to sail away on the sea! 10! Really beautiful poem, I loved it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Sam Varghis 11 January 2012

Beautiful write. It has all the thrills of a voyage

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