Zach Stahle

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Make Me Move - Poem by Zach Stahle

The air is so thick
this room is so crowded
the lights are too bright
this music is so loud
the drinks are too costly to enjoy
as goes for the substances
...and I love it more than anything
I'm here every weekend
but all I can do is watch as the bodies blur in the strobe-lit smoke
I'd be a part of that blurry euphoria...
I'd dazzle them with my wit
I'd charm anyone within my reach
I'd be amazed...
who would ask to dance with
this
this stuttering mess
too shy to move or speak
too self conscious to seem interested
So I sit here...
I stare...
I stare at the bodies throbbing in time...
And I pray...
I pray she'd ask me to dance with her...
to give me grace...
or a bit of confidence...
to move...


Comments about Make Me Move by Zach Stahle

  • (8/28/2009 5:46:00 PM)


    Aww a cute write. Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

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  • (6/24/2009 8:14:00 PM)


    This is a really good poem! ! We all could relate! ! GREAT JOB! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2009 7:30:00 PM)


    this one's my favourite. it's cute :) .
    and you know, a lot of girls like shy guys.
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  • (3/19/2009 11:31:00 AM)


    wow i love this poem (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2009 9:40:00 PM)


    wow i really like this poem! ! !
    you really put a lot of emotion into it...
    and i know exactly how you feel.
    i've been there many times before
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  • (9/24/2008 7:17:00 PM)


    I love this! ! ! You have such an amazing flow in this poem. Awesome job! !
    God Bless! !
    ~Lacey~
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 26, 2008


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