Kesav Venkat Easwaran
Kerala- India

Making Love...

Rating: 5.0
Falling over Rock
on course
and rolling over
smooth,
Water tells him
on her bed
a secret
in his pores!

'Day in day out,
I make you look
bright clean and new,
wash off all those
dirt and rags
that clings on
to your cracks,

Keep you always
shiny black
showering
love on you'
kissing rocky cheeks
-a smack-
tells 'much I
care for you'

Rock silently
nods and smiles
embraces
tightly close
Struggling under
rocking love
Water giggles
and froths!

Rolling again in joy
love flows
incessantly
on course…

04 06 08
Wednesday, June 4, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery,love,metaphor,nature
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COMMENTS
Luo Zhihai 22 December 2020
Making love, rocking love, love full of stimulating?
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 July 2020
Whenever we perceive the falling fresh light on rock and we motivate life, we feel the touch of love of nature. We feel God's greatest love within each heart beat and our emotional mind. Even rock silently nods and smiles. This poem is very beautiful and excellently penned.
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Magadha Rani 08 February 2020
Rolling again in joy love flows incessantly......lovely expression! A beautiful poem...........10++++
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2020
An elegant piece of poetry with sweet poetic expression! I liked these lines most, " 'Day in day out, I make you look/bright clean and new/wash off all those/dirt and rags/that clings on/to your cracks, " ....Beautifully penned......10
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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2020
Love is in everything everywhere. A bit of wild wet yet soft imagination this. Thanks. Glad my piece impressed you
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Luz Hanaii 26 January 2020
Nice poem, great flow with metaphorical imagery.
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Kesav Easwaran 01 February 2020
Thanks Luz. Liked your good words
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Expiallidocious 20 January 2020
Wow for over a decade you've been around.., , and after 12 years I have just read you.....so under which rock have I been?
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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2020
Under anonymous rock! Thank you. Glad my poem impressed you
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Magadha Rani 18 January 2020
A sweet poem.......so lovely poetic expression! Loved reading it..........................10
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Kesav Easwaran 01 February 2020
Thanks Magadha. Glad you liked it
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2019
...contd... the love in between crevices you alone have imagined and seen we enjoyed the naturality o poet of PH you are creative You reminded me when on a rock we two sat helplessy enjoyed that moment too you took me back to my youth..who wouldn't love you
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2019
INCREDIBLE POEM IMAGERY IS SUPERB EVEN I FELT HE WATER COLD NOW WARMED UP INTO EACH CURVE FLOWS SCENT all love your assent so many have read your essence GOD SENT EVEN P IN ME ROSE ABOVE NORMAL.... WHAT A LOVELY POEM SENSUAL AND SEXY OF COURSE HOPE IT HELPS THOSE WHO SWAY OFF THE COURSE BUT HOPE TO ADMIT...contd
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subramanian ram2 29 November 2018
eventhough rock looks hard and you have assumed it to be the man, i suggest that you look at rock as a soft mouldable lady and water reching out to the protrutions and depths and curves of the rock getting touched all through forcing it to an level. finally falling apart once in a while.
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