Making Love... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Making Love...

Rating: 5.0

Falling over Rock
on course
and rolling over
Water tells him
on her bed
a secret
in his pores!

'Day in day out,
I make you look
bright clean and new,
wash off all those
dirt and rags
that clings on
to your cracks,

Keep you always
shiny black
love on you'
kissing rocky cheeks
-a smack-
tells 'much I
care for you'

Rock silently
nods and smiles
tightly close
Struggling under
rocking love
Water giggles
and froths!

Rolling again in joy
love flows
on course…

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Wednesday, June 4, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery,love,metaphor,nature
Expiallidocious 20 January 2020

Wow for over a decade you've been around.., , and after 12 years I have just read under which rock have I been?

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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2020

Under anonymous rock! Thank you. Glad my poem impressed you

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 February 2019

...contd... the love in between crevices you alone have imagined and seen we enjoyed the naturality o poet of PH you are creative You reminded me when on a rock we two sat helplessy enjoyed that moment too you took me back to my youth..who wouldn't love you

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Rob Lamberton 07 February 2023

"Rolling again in joy love flows incessantly on course…" love is a constant giving and receiving. The rough rocks smooth with time.Thanks for this gem!

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Luo Zhihai 22 December 2020

Making love, rocking love, love full of stimulating。

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 July 2020

Whenever we perceive the falling fresh light on rock and we motivate life, we feel the touch of love of nature. We feel God's greatest love within each heart beat and our emotional mind. Even rock silently nods and smiles. This poem is very beautiful and excellently penned.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2020

An elegant piece of poetry with sweet poetic expression! I liked these lines most, " 'Day in day out, I make you look/bright clean and new/wash off all those/dirt and rags/that clings on/to your cracks, " ....Beautifully penned......10

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2020

Love is in everything everywhere. A bit of wild wet yet soft imagination this. Thanks. Glad my piece impressed you

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Luz Hanaii 26 January 2020

Nice poem, great flow with metaphorical imagery.

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Kesav Easwaran 01 February 2020

Thanks Luz. Liked your good words

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