Thursday, January 11, 2007

Meadow World Comments

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Under a red night sky
Our arms embrace, no sound
Is heard 'cept soft breathing
And a distant bleat from the farmlands,

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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Landrey 14 January 2007

Writers have tried and some have succeeded in capturing what you did so powerfully in the 5 stanzas but they all miss the glory of the last phrase tied with the words in quotes...great pinnacle. Way to bend words into your own special use, I love it. -landrey

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